Friday, October 10, 2008

A Time to Remember continued

***I changed the main charecters name from Cassandra to Layla***

I stared out the window and leaned my head on the glass. There were only four other cars on the road beside our blue minivan, all of which were going the other direction. We were driving on a back road to avoid traffic.
I pulled my legs up to my chest trying to find a comfortable position. This is what I had been trying to do for the past hour. I was restless and stiff from spending so much time in the car.
“Are we almost there?” I asked. I had been resisting asking this question, but the words just slipped from my glossy lips.
“Not too much longer Layla,” replied my dad.
“Ok,” I said. Then I reached down into the bag of chips by my seat and grabbed a handful. I looked into the dark ominous sky. There was nothing but dense gray clouds filling the sky.
Then, a blue car pulled onto the road. They were driving directly behind us. The driver honked the car’s horn several times, rolled down the window and yelled something that I couldn’t make out.
“I’m not going any faster!” screamed by dad, he shook his fist in the air.
The blue car behind us pulled out into the next lane over, of on going traffic. He sped up, and was beginning to pull in front of my car. But then another car was heading straight at that car. The car tried to stop before hitting the blue car, but was too late. The two cars rammed right into each other. There was a loud crash and I screamed. And then the cars spun around leaving black marks on the road. They were coming towards my car. I screamed again as I heard a second crash. I felt my car being pushed across the road. Then everything went black. That was the last thing I remembered.

1 comment:

dramagirl23 said...

i really love this story. i can't wait for you to write more. i really love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!